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Fast

Written for the drabble theme "Waves".

Title: Fast
Series: Free!
Length: 100 words
Genre: Humor, Lite Porn
Pairing: Rin/Miho
Summary: Being fast isn't always a good thing.



He stripped down with great haste and enthusiasm before diving in. His strokes were fast and powerful, bringing him closer to the finish, until he emerged victorious, punching the air with his fist.

“Yeah!” Panting, muscles burning, he shook out his hair. “That’s gotta be my best time yet!” With arms as wide as his sharkish grin, he sank back, immensely satisfied.

He was out, and she’d barely gotten wet. Her blue sheets rumpled around them like waves she’d only begun to feel; she looked at him with humor and frustration both. “Must I remind you it’s not a race?”


Comments

( 4 comments — Leave a comment )
cal_reflector
Oct. 28th, 2014 03:09 am (UTC)
The only problem with the fic is the Genre and Summary. Take those out and it's gold. Post it, I want to read people's reactions.
mellowcandle
Oct. 28th, 2014 03:38 pm (UTC)
What's wrong with the genre and summary? They're accurate.
cal_reflector
Oct. 29th, 2014 02:58 am (UTC)
It warns the reader, giving away the punch line.
mellowcandle
Oct. 29th, 2014 03:29 pm (UTC)
That's the problem with fic and fandom these days: everyone wants warnings to the point where there's no surprise. "I wouldn't have read this if I'd known there was death/sex/gluten, how dare you not warn!"
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